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I agree with that. 
I like how you seem to have hinted that something has happened that has led to this story, in a sense... The phrasing is good and the "even now" strengthens the meaning more.
Profound piece.
I like how you seem to have hinted that something has happened that has led to this story, in a sense... The phrasing is good and the "even now" strengthens the meaning more.
Profound piece.