I wrote this a while ago, then stopped feeling this way. Recently, I've started again.
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The safe question: What do you like most, and least, about this piece, and why?
Me trying to think of a complex question: Do you think the charachter involved is struggling to overcome something truly sinful, or that he is judging himself too harshly?
My questions suck D:
it is an atmosphere I need to learn to breath
I simply love it for that, including it's meaning
2. i feel that the character is judging himself too harshly, as we grow we gain maturity, wisdom, and common sense and with our new found self awareness and perspective we look at the same things differently. growing up simply is accepting that we did stupid things in the past, realizing that we are going to do more stupid things, and of course knowing that we should try not to do similar stupid things.
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2nd question: I think the person feels hopeless. He's doesn't know if he can be redeemed.
"This isn't something to get over, it is an atmosphere I need to learn to breath."
So true.
That and the last 3 sentences are just awesome.